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Practice 01_THE PARAGRAPH

Hello miss good evening, hello everyone In this week of classes in the second registration we have received our first practice, we saw about the paragraph. We learned the importance that editing and revision is a way in which we can show the change that was given to our composition and the way in which we have to publish our final composition. We receive two topics one is Good nutrition and the other is about Hiking. This is my composition on both topics. GOOD NUTRITION Good nutrition (a sufficient and balanced diet combined with regular physical exercise) is a fundamental element of good health. On the contrary, poor nutrition can reduce immunity, increase vulnerability to disease, impair physical and mental development, and reduce productivity. Otherwise, bad nutrition, in any of its forms (both undernutrition and overeating and being overweight), carries health risks such as vitamin and mineral deficiencies, infant deaths, prevents healthy development and affects productivity throug...

Evaluation 02

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Hello Miss Good night, Hello Everyone In the fifth week of classes we have received our second evaluation, we view about the editing & proofreading. We learned the importance that editing and proofreading is a way in which we can show the change that was given to our composition. This my evaluation, my composition about "My Opinion On Living Alone". PREWRITTING DRAFTING EDITING & PROOFREADING It is becoming independent, it is about getting your own material things and paying your own debts. Living alone will be an opportunity to proclaim your independence. This journey will involve a lot of management learning, unexpected discoveries such as things not keeping themselves clean and tidy, and above all, a journey of self-discovery that will help shape the person you want to be. The pros of living alone are basically limited to one fact: freedom. This freedom will spread throughout your new cabin. Not only can you decorate your home as you see fit. If you want the walls ...

Practice 02_Drafting

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 Hello Miss Good afternoon, Hello Everyone In the third week of classes we have received our second practice, we review the prewriting techniques,  This is my prewriting technique. We learned to organize our ideas to create our drafts, so we learned to make our composition of a specific story or topic. This my practice, my first drafting. Applying the drafting strategies. Part l. Cooking (Lemon Pie) PREWRITING Drafting Part ll. Routine Prewriting Drafting

Practice 01_Prewriting

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 Hello Miss Good afternoon, Hello Everyone In the second week of classes we have received our first practice, we saw the prewriting techniques, the truth seemed to me a good beginning of practices since it teaches us the first thing that we must do before composing a paragraph, story or movie, etc. Organize the ideas before creating a draft to do the prewriting about something we want to talk about. This is my prewriting technique. NARROWING         1. Friends. Topic: “Friends are important just like family”. More Specific: “Friends are important because they are always there for you just like family”.         2. Family Vacation. Topic: “It is the best to share with family”. More Specific: “Everything is better if you are with family”. PREWRITING Nuclear Family. Something Valuable.

Introduction about me

 Hello... My name is Karla Elena Bautista Paredes, what I like the most are the cool places, the walks that he likes to listen to music, I am a very calm person, I like to work a lot in a team, I help my mom with her business, and what I expect from this subject is to be able to learn to compose in English and know how to express words.