Evaluation 02

Hello Miss Good night, Hello Everyone

In the fifth week of classes we have received our second evaluation, we view about the editing & proofreading.

We learned the importance that editing and proofreading is a way in which we can show the change that was given to our composition.

This my evaluation, my composition about "My Opinion On Living Alone".

PREWRITTING

DRAFTING

EDITING & PROOFREADING

It is becoming independent, it is about getting your own material things and paying your own debts. Living alone will be an opportunity to proclaim your independence. This journey will involve a lot of management learning, unexpected discoveries such as things not keeping themselves clean and tidy, and above all, a journey of self-discovery that will help shape the person you want to be.

The pros of living alone are basically limited to one fact: freedom. This freedom will spread throughout your new cabin. Not only can you decorate your home as you see fit. If you want the walls to be black: go ahead! If you want the X-box to be in the kitchen, no one will say no. But if you were to take charge of a family, that is already a greater degree of responsibility because it will further increase expenses and everything to pay there would be many more things to come.

Being independent and alone can have its advantages and disadvantages.

Now that you're on your own, make schedules where you can develop new skills: play an instrument without anyone telling you to be quiet. Draw, dance, go out to exercise, decorate your house. The limits are in your imagination (and unfortunately also in your budget.)

You will begin to notice that in addition to food, there are other things that are not bought, paid for or done alone, such as having clean clothes. You will see that your shirts do not iron themselves, nor do your jackets arrive at the dry cleaner's alone. Being independent, a total reorganization occurs. You will have to buy a washing machine, or take your clothes to the laundry. And the same will happen with cleaning your house. In this case, preparing an adequate budget is once again the issue in question.